I am learning to add some detail to my writing.
Lucky the Whale
One
day in the blue sea there was a whale called Lucky. She had ten friends. Her
best friend was called Emily. They were very best friends. When Lucky was a
baby Emily was a baby too. Lucky and Emily had the same birthday. Lucky and
Emily’s birthday was on the 2nd August. When it was the 2nd
August Lucy and Emily were happy. Then Lucky’s friend came.
I always add lots of detail to my story. Sometimes I need to look at my plan to help me remember all of them.
1 comment:
I love reading your very detailed stories.
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